Lost Souls - Chapter 20
Thanks for reading, commenting and posting nuggets. Hope you enjoy this next chapter.MaryKLost SoulsChapter 20 Nick withdrew the comb allowing Megan’s hair to fall freely to her shoulders. Drawing...
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Ellie is certainly a charmer! She is definitely Heath's Princess. Love Ellie's thoughts that perhaps a dress wasn't so bad and her comparing pappee's carved horses to Uncle Carl's. I think Audra's...
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So glad Jarrod's wife greeted him warmly and, now since Nick and Megan have talked things out, I hope Heath will be able to see the same warmth from her. I feel bad for Audra. I just hope she listens...
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I can't blame Audra for her reaction, but Victoria had promised no difficult conversations. Now how will Megan treat Heath? These chapters always leave me wanting more.
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I expected Audra's reaction about Heath. After the conversation with Nick I hope Megan will treat Heath better!Hurry another chapter, Mary
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Love the conversation between Heath and Ellie. Sounds like she didn't fall far from the tree. Eager to see how Megan rights her attitude towards Heath. Mary.
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You did a nice job with the contrasts in this story, from sweet Ellie and sad Megan to kind Louise and angry Audra. More when you can! I am anxious to know how this evening turns out with all of them...
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Audra’s reaction at the end is understandable. Now with the family all together I hope some healing can begin.
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Hope Audra has some shin pads on. Have a feeling she's in line for a kick from a highly protective little princess very soon.
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Just read all the chapters up to this one...really great story! I love that you have the Barkleys finally admitting their HUGE mistake making Heath go with Bentell. And it was a very plausible bit of...
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